aphasia of angel astor --- senior project help???

Alright so. My senior project, focusing on the use of gaming as an art medium, was to make an RPG game exemplifying said trend/movement. So I dug out a scrapped project labelled "culdesac" which was set to centre on Angel's life in the slammer post-epilogue. It was gonna be very YN-style; he takes a heavy dosage of x medication and hallucinates visiting some of his past experiences friends places etc. Every hallucination ends with a visit to Cnctep, his distorted memory of his younger sister, and a walk down a very dingy, dimly-lit hallway (Amsterdam). I was hoping to keep it 6 chapters max, the climax being the last visit to Amsterdam in which he finally remembers most of what happened. Then the epilogue.

What I don't have right now is what should be in the chapters and for whatever reason I'm running really low on ideas here.
thusfar confirmed:

• A conglomerate of one of Serenity's parties
  
• A stroll through an empty, quartz-esque version of the school ending in a nightmarish visit from a walking corpse (see https://ministry-school.rpg-board.net/t177-forest-hills-center-for-the-mentally-disabled)

also there'll be a few cutscenes while he's awake -- two visits and a basic layout of his ward're set up already. the epilogue MIGHT have two branches or i'll just combine them somehow blehh

it's multimedia (like i'm using a lot of photography and traditional artwork in the game as well as pixel art) i've really given up on mixing my own music or finding SFX so i'm prolly gonna just rip most of those or find appropriate like PD instrumentals. i'm using a lot of satie thusfar lol


anyway yeah i really need any help on this i can get. primarily ideas because i can do most of the artwork/programming myself (and have to obv) sooooooooo boom

This is going to be super cool! I love how much ambition there is going to be behind it. Obviously, there has to be visions from the island they used to live on. You know how there were rumors about cannibals living on the island? Maybe in Angel's visions, he could actually dream about them living there.

I think that the party he envisions should be that masquerade ball. Or the sci-fi one. Those two are the most iconic.

Also, Rachel being a religious freak.

I ALWAYS FORGET THE CANNIBAL THING FUUCK
ok i took screens of the powerpoint with screens from the game is that ok




as for the balls i was planning to have them just sort of.... mix. like have it just be this one big weird fetishy party then some bitch gets run over in the front yard cue enddream

Do the cannibal thing do the cannibal thing.

I think that this is looking awesome, honestly. I love the artwork that you used with the pastels. It reminds me of Yume Nikki so much and it looks so dreary and nice. ;____;

That works too. But, I feel like the party should be on the masquerade themed one.

Also, you have to include Elroy in there. They ARE twins.

I second the masquerade party, it's definitely going to be more creepy than a random sci-fi thing. As for the cannibalism YESESSSSSSSSSSSSS

i really hate the cannibalism thing like it was cute as like a kiddy horror story but the fact that YALL ALWAYS BRING IT UP ITS LIKE OLD SHAME CRIES but in this case it actually works really well bc i was sort of at a loss for what should happen in the island sequence. that should be a good end for it though

And yeah Elroy is going to appear a couple times it's just that he doesn't play as major a role as Serenity and Mel. And Chuck. Idk how I'm even going to fit Chuck in he just kind of is that guy that dies... like maybe I'll have him start just kind of showing up or standing at the end of the hall maybe around the 4th dream or so... like idk bleh

like really just having yall brainstorm even a little bit is motivation thank you guys so much <3<3<3<3

I think to be Chuck and the others fit properly you'll need to include more visions from school. I mean, a shit ton happens since then. You can even have something as simple as Titanium Chronicles meetings. That sort of things works fine. But those years are completely necessary.